A few months ago I was in the Western Morning News
with a group of other PRs, talking with the paper’s editor.
A colleague, Sue Bradbury, commented on how difficult
it was to get coverage for small businesses. Couldn’t they have a dedicated
page? “Great idea!” said Alan. And the rest is history.
For small Westcountry businesses wanting to get
regional exposure about new developments, this is brilliant.
So what are they looking for? The text from an email sent to me from the WMN's
deputy Business Ed, Catherine Barnes, may help you.
I’d asked Catherine whether she liked the current
fashion for packaging press releases into pretty email templates. Her response,
as was every other journalist’s was: “God, No!” And then she added…
BUT A GREAT PICTURE ALWAYS HELPS- ESPECIALLY IF IT IS
AVAILABLE HI-RES AND IN FOCUS!
When sending emails: A nice, clear type font is
good- don’t make them too ‘busy’.
A readable format:
Sum up the story’s main message in sentence- or two.
Further information:
Tell us:
The name of the company and where it is based (town,
please- as we are a regional paper, so Devon/Cornwall is too vague.)
The role of the spokesperson and/ or subject the
item is focused upon
When the event happened- or is set to take place
When was the business established and how many
employees does it have?
Avoid jargon and any acronyms should be initially
accompanied by words they stand for, in full.
Useful daytime contact numbers- preferably the
client’s- we like to get the story down, in our own words.
Please try to ensure that the client (and you!) will
be available if we follow up; I’ve been taken aback by the number of people who
appear to head off on holiday the moment they press ’send’.
For business news, please include figures if possible,
when referring to growth, or investment, figures. If an exact sum cannot be
disclosed, then a percentage increase from the previous year/month is a good
indicator.
*The Western Morning News SME Business
News page now runs on the last Monday of every month and will provide you with
the best idea of all, in terms of how we deliver our content.
*WMN business pages also run daily,
Tues-Sat, with our extended supplement on a Thursday and special supplements
covering Green innovation, local business growth appearing at various dates
throughout the year. Again, you can keep in touch with what we – and the
businesses we cover- are doing, by reading the paper- and encouraging your
clients to do the same!
As Catherine said - Hope this unsolicited feedback is
of use!


